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 July 31, 2010  
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          Now that he is ninety-some-odd years old and can no longer
 
     lumber down the banks of the Alapaha, he has to scooch low and back
 
     like a brittle old turtle. Down the root ladder set in packed gray
 
     dirt to the dais of roots below--under a broad tupelo and a cypress
 
     older than he is. Still, the cypress is sprouting tender green
 
     needles, and the tupelo struts out over the slow water. Cypress
 
     knees, like pagan idols, stand in the eddy along the edge, with gray-
 
     pied moccasins braided around some of them. The buzz of crickets and
 
     locusts join with a hawk crying over the banks of inward-leaning
 
     birches. The felled heart cypress and pine along the unsunned banks
 
     match the fish-roe tint of Dump Sanders who, in his patched khaki,
 
     blends right in while he fishes.
 
          On the platform of roots he stands, cranking his backbone to
 
     straight position--he will fish now--then reaches for his cane pole
 
     in the wattle of bamboos growing along the bank. The pole has caught
 
     many a jack and more mudcats that he can count. He practically lives
 
     on fish, has raised a big family on fish caught out of this hole--
 
     that, and the corn and peas and such he grew on halves, plus coons he
 
     trapped in the muddy slews and hammocks of Swanoochee County.
 
     Unwinding the line of his pole, he listens for sounds that belong--
 
     the river's rilling, a crow's sore-throated caw--sorting them from
 
     sounds that don't belong, the clank of wood on metal, which likely
 
     means somebody is fishing from a boat upriver.
 
          He goes dead still, his shadow merging with the shadows of maple
 
     switches on the sun-spotted water. As he gazes upriver, his
 
     cataracted eyes pick up the blur of boat and man spiriting from the
 
     tea-tinted shallows toward the smoky drop-off of Dump's fishing hole.
 
     In a minute the boat will pass, and in another minute Dump will bait
 
     up with that worm he can't yet see on the nearby red-stemmed maple
 
     branch. In spring, you don't have to bring bait. A smart fisherman
 
     can find bait, a smart fisherman can also whittle cork from the
 
     driftwood. It helps when you are old and poor and on your own.
 
          The boat trolls right into Dump's fishing space, not two feet
 
     from him but blocked from view by the wall-like tupelo. Its metal
 
     sides scrub against the curb of cypress roots, scaring off the fish.
 
     While the man fishes, Dump listens. Phoof! The pulled tab on a can of
 
     cola or beer. Sounds of swigging. A plastic tackle box snaps open and
 
     clacks shut. Then some cursing-the bite of a hook maybe. Hugging the
 
     tree trunk, Dump sidles north along the bank of snaky roots, careful
 
     not to trip, careful not to pry his shadow from the shadow of the
 
     tupelo now falling across the bow of the boat.
 
          The man's fishing line sings, snaps-"Sonofabitch!"
 
         Dump draws back as if stung by a yellow jacket. He knows that
 
     voice-that harpy, gruff boom-a voice he hates. Boss Pender. Dump
 
     fears that the voice is all in his head, since he hears it so often,
 
     waking and sleeping; he might only be conjuring it from nothing now,
 
     he might be losing his mind.
 
          (italics)When you get done turning under that back field, go on
 
     over to the old Watson place and fertilize that corn. Rain's on its
 
     way.
 
          But it's sundown now, Dump would say to himself, tipping the
 
     sweat-sopped brim of his hat and peering west/southwest toward the
 
     Gulf. No clouds scrolling up, just a butchered sun leaking blood onto
 
     the pineline (he never said that to Pender, never talked back to any
 
     of the men he farmed for). But of course sundown was the whole point:
 
     keeping Dump on a job that would carry over into the night and stall
 
     him from returning home-home being a small, green, dogtrot house that
 
     Dump could call his own only as long as he sharecropped for Pender-or
 
     as long as Pender could do what he had in mind to do with certain
 
     other shared property.
 
          Dump waits now till he hears the boat risping along with the
 
     current, then peeps through the bole of the tupelo at Boss Pender's
 
     padded back and silver head gliding in and out of the broomed willow
 
     shadows downriver. Though Dump believes he'll have to wait another
 
     hour or so before his fish will come back, he tips to the maple tree,
 
     left of the tupelo, and plucks a couple of worms, and deposits them
 
     in the Prince Albert can in his shirt pocket. Then he perches on the
 
     bench of tree roots and waits.
 
         Sunday, worst day of the week for running into others fishing
 
     the Alapaha. Seems like Dump spends the better part of his days
 
     dodging them. They don't go to church, but Dump doesn't blame them.
 
     Church is here. God is here, on this sunny morning. A breeze ruffles
 
     the tree tops, then wrinkles the surface of the water like silk.
 
          Suddenly Dump hears the boat come banging back-oar on metal, oar
 
     on metal-and then it shows in the sun-blared strip of black water off
 
     the far bank. Too late for him to get up and hide. Riding high and
 
     heavy on the jacked-up seat, Pender clanks his paddle to the bottom
 
     of the boat, grunts himself forward, and feeds up a rope tied to the
 
     bow from the mangle of tackle boxes, rods, and brown paper sacks.
 
     Dump is so still, he's barely breathing. He can feel the pain
 
     festering in his joints, but his mind never strays. Shoulders tucked,
 
     knees crossed, shrunken, he watches his shadow on the burnished bower
 
     of roots, barely thicker than the cane pole in his hand.
 
          Pender swivels left in the elevated seat and wraps the rope
 
     around a cypress knee, swivels right and picks up a rod, rears and
 
     casts. A glittery red and blue split-tail plastic worm ploops into
 
     the water almost at Dump's feet. Boss Pender is squinting into the
 
     sun now, face red as a ripe tupelo berry, his silver hair shining
 
     like sun on frost.
 
          Dump has just about decided that Boss can't see him because of
 
     the sun in his eyes, or maybe because Dump blends so well into the
 
     background. Then Pender reels in and casts again, this time
 
     downstream of the tupelo, and shades his eyes with his hand, gazing
 
     right at Dump. "Hey," he hollers, "you wouldn't happen to know a man
 
     goes by the name of Dump Sanders, would you?"
    
         Dump clears his throat, spits-he's been dying to spit for God
 
     knows how long. "Can't say as I do," he calls back.
 
          "Well," says Pender, shifting and bracing one hand on his
 
     bloated waist, "I'm from the IRS. Been looking for a feller owes us
 
     some money." His great haunches spread on the boat seat, his gut
 
     settles on his lap.
 
          Dump tee-hees into his hand.
 
          Boss laughs. "How you, Dump?"
 
          "Ain't no good," says Dump, and wipes his mouth with the back of
 
     his hardened hand, then crosses his wrists on his crossed thighs.
 
          "Come by here a second ago, didn't see you," says Pender. No
 
     mention of fishing in what everybody knows is Dump's hole.
 
          "I been right here," says Dump.
 
          The tip of Pender's rod dips, then bends and creaks, as he
 
     starts to reel in, watching the water dash as his fish lunges and
 
     wallows, then sulls on is side for Pender to winch it into the boat.
 
          Old mudfish," says Pender. "You want him?"
 
          "Can't say as I do," says Dump. When his wife was living she
 
     would make mudfish balls-Dump loved them-fried brown.
 
          Pender lifts the fish by its bottom lip, yanks the hook free,
 
     and drops the fish flapping to the bottom of the boat. Poles and cans
 
     ringing and knocking. "Old mammy fish like that'll eat up your bass,"
 
     he says.
 
          Boss rifles through his tackle box until he finds his
 
     pocketknife, thumbnails a blade to open position, and gets a good
 
     grip on the handle in his right fist. Then he rams the blade into the
 
     flouncing fish, rinses the knife in the water, and puts it back in
 
     his tackle box. Hardly missing a beat, he picks up his rod, checks
 
     his glittery plastic worm, and casts it upriver-Dumps's side. The
 
     line swings down into Dump's hole as if the hook is pulled by a
 
     magnet.
 
          "Been catching much this spring?" asks Pender.
 
          "None to speak of."
 
          Pender's rod bends, goes straight. Silence. Then, "Sears is got
 
     a li`l ole trolling motor I been looking at. I ain't much for all
 
     this paddling and it getting hot." He squints up at the sun, then at
 
     Dump posing in the shade as if he's been planted there.
 
          "Course my knees in the shape they in," says Pender, "won't be
 
     many more trips for me. That old gout! Can't hardly put in and take
 
     out no more."
 
          He reels in, changes lures-this time a yellow plastic worm with
 
     a green head and bead eyes-and swings it out, watching water rings
 
     form. He has cast midriver, halfway between him and Dump. "That
 
     oughta do it," he says, and leans back till the boat seat groans. "I
 
     had to put in up there at the bridge this time. My landing washed out
 
     last winter when the river come up."
 
          Dump knows and suspects Pender knows he knows that Pender no
 
     longer owns a boat landing, no longer owns even the land the landing
 
     was on.
 
          Pender waits, reels in a bit. "Looks like this old river's
 
     getting wider, don't it?" He rests one hand on his tree-trunk thigh,
 
     staring up and down the river.
 
          "Yessir, it do." Dump has been watching the river widen for many
 
     years-current skiving away the sandy banks and lashing at the tiers
 
     of trees till the treeline that used to stand midbank has stepped up
 
     to the edge to meet its doom, naked roots anchoring to the
 
     riverbottom. He's been watching the river change, just as he's been
 
     watching Boss Pender change, from rich man to poor man. All that farm
 
     and timberland in the seventies, dwindling to nothing. Overtaxed,
 
     undervalued, lost.
 
          Not that Dump could gloat over Pender and the others losing
 
     their inherited farms; without them and their land, Dump was out of
 
     work, out of house, out of money-not pride, since he couldn't lose
 
     what he never had. But it had almost been worth his losses to see
 
     Pender lose it all. Watching Pender grow fat and feeble and foolish
 
     after years of being so lean and mean and proud.
 
          (italics)Hate like the devil, Dump, to have to leave you with
 
     next to nothing, right here at the end of the year and Christmas
 
     coming. You with that big drove of younguns to buy Santy Claus for.
 
     But you know how it is-I got that fertilizer bill to pay. Seed bill
 
     and what-have-you. Looks like farming's going to nothing. Maybe next
 
     year.
 
          Pender's rod bends, his line sings, and he reels with the
 
     leisure of a satisfied fat man. A ten-pound bass shines silver
 
     beneath the umber surface, streaks left then right, flips from the
 
     churning water with its sleek body arched, then bellyflops toward the
 
     riverbottom. The line whips and the boat rocks, balancing itself like
 
     scales. Pender grins, laughs, whoops, holds his line tight and high,
 
     and trawls the big fish in. "I got you, boy!" he says and lifts the
 
     fish with its notched tail furling. He lowers it like a baby into the
 
     boat.
 
          Both hands spread on his knees now, Pender presents his gleeful
 
     face to Dump. "Man, I'm burning up," he says. The fish writhes and
 
     drums on the boat floor, sounds vibrating across the bothered river.
 
          "Reckon I'll just mosey on in," says Pender, swiveling his seat
 
     and reaching for the rope wound around the cypress knee. Suddenly he
 
     yelps, jerks back and jumps up, clutching his right hand with his
 
     left. The boat pitches side to side with Pender now lunging and
 
    spraddling his legs, trying to steady it. Too late. One more pitch of
 
     the stern and water pours into the boat. Dump watches Pender tilt
 
     sidelong, hollering "Snake!" in that voice that counts in Swanoochee
 
     County, then gurgling as he goes under. His silver hair streaming
 
     over his red open face, he bobs among the scatter of tackle boxes and
 
     ice chest, rods and empty cola cans, and sinking paper sacks
 
     releasing cellophane-wrapped Moonpies and saltine crackers. The
 
     bloody carcass of the mudfish, white belly up, adds its marbling to
 
     the river water. Darts from the freed bass point toward Dump's hole.
 
          Dump, on his feet now but stiff and silent, watches as Pender
 
     dog paddles to the other bank, downriver from the snake-wrapped
 
     cypress knee, and drags himself up onto a toppled cypress, panting
 
     and gasping. He just hangs there over the water-polished cypress,
 
     half-in, half-out of the water. "Old moccasin got me," he yells, as
 
     if in explanation for looking the fool. "What you do `bout that?" He
 
     is eyeballing his right hand like it's a fascinating rock.
 
          "They say if you got ery knife," yells Dump, "cut it and suck
 
     the pysin."
 
          Still clinging to the cypress with one arm, Pender digs into his
 
     right pocket, then gazes downstream at his tackle box floating past a
 
     sand bar.
 
          "You got your knife on you?" he calls.
 
          "Yessir," says Dump, and fishes his jackknife from his pants
 
     pocket. "Got one right here I'll loan you."
 
          "How bout bringing it on over here."
 
          "Can't swim a lick," says Dump. He can-or used to could-but he's
 
     not going to.
 
          "Don't know if I can make it over there," says Pender, wrenching
 
     round to look at the far bank. "I'm just about whipped."
 
          Dump's heart starts pumping hard, as if the snake venom is
 
     pumping from Pender's bloodstream to his. "Want me to run up to the
 
     commissary for help?"
 
          "I reckon," says Pender, resting his head on the cypress trunk.
 
          "Hate to leave you like that."
 
          "I hate for you to," says Pender and checks his hand-now swollen
 
     and stiff as a tarry work glove.
 
          "It's a good piece there and back," Dump calls, as if to keep
 
     talking is the best medicine. "You gone be awright?"
 
          "I don't know," says Pender with his head still on the log.
 
          "I'll be on back," says Dump and starts his slow progress up the
 
     bank, looking back now and then at Boss Pender.
 
          "Man that old and fat ain't got no business," Dump says to
 
     himself, halfway up the bank.
 
          "Hey, Dump," yells Pender, "I don't think you oughta go yet."
 
         "How come's that?" Dump yells back.
 
          "I don't want to die by myself."
 
          "What you say?"
 
          No answer.
 
          "You OK?" Dump is scooting down the bank again. He'll just have
 
     to try swimming, try to help.
 
          "I ain't OK," says Pender. "Ain't OK atall. Think it's my
 
     heart."
 
          Dump's foot slips from the rooty ledge, and he slides on his
 
     belly to the platform below. He grunts. On his knees, he crawls
 
     around till he can spot the bloated body through the warp of heat. "I
 
     done fell over here," he calls, "broke something."
 
          No answer, no movement from the log, just water lights spiraling
 
     up the trees on the west bank.
 
          "You ain't pulling my leg, are you?" Dump, who never saw the
 
     snake, can imagine Boss Pender and his foxhunting buddies at the
 
     commissary teasing him later about rushing around trying to get help
 
     for Pender, who most likely is playing a prank on him. They do it all
 
     the time. Once, Dump's coon dog leaped off the tailgate of his pickup
 
     and hung himself by his leash, and Dump didn't find the dog, dragging
 
     behind the truck like a butchered hog, till he coasted in at the
 
     commissary for gas and saw them all on the porch laughing.
 
          And then there was that other time: all of them gathered to josh
 
     and lie and laugh about Pender sending Dump out to work at night so
 
     Pender could be with Dump's oldest daughter, who by rights should
 
     have been ruined but instead went on to college-paid her own way-and
 
     became a school teacher. A good daughter. Dump can depend on her to
 
     bring him home-cooked food and take him to the doctor-been twice in
 
     his life-and she even gives him Father's Day cards which he doesn't
 
     deserve because he never said, "Stop that, Pender; don't you mess
 
     with my daughter no more." He never said that-not even to his wife,
 
     who likewise went along to the fields at night to open the fertilizer
 
     sacks and dump them into the hopper. Both of them knowing, but
 
     neither of them saying, just eyeing one another from where she stood
 
     by the truckload of fifty-pound sacks with Dump on the tractor, the
 
     chut-chut-chut of the engine scuttling across the emerald rows of
 
     marching corn and rising in marl and potash dust to the star-pricked
 
     sky. Dump's hand had been on the switch key, threatening to cut the
 
     sound so his wife could hear clear what he had to say, that she'd
 
     best be getting on to the house-"Stay there where you belong, Woman,
 
     and see to the younguns." But he never said that either.
 
          "You better say something," Dump calls to Pender, "for I'm long-
 
     gone if you don't."
 
          The slow water rills, the hawk lifts over the river, crying.
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