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 July 31, 2010  
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Spring/Summer 1996
 
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          I wonder for maybe the tenth time this evening why that mama
 
     wren with the worm in her beak doesn't go ahead and eat it. Why she
 
     keeps dipping from the eaves to the shrubbery, cranking her head side
 
     to side, watching me paint my nails Flame. Waiting for me to leave
 
     so she can feed her keening chicks in the nest on the rafter above my
 
     swing. With all those trees across the highway and behind my double-
 
     wide, why did she have to pick this place for a nest? Late summer--
 
     not even the right season for nesting. I'm not leaving, not till my
 
     nails dry. She can go on and eat the worm. I hold up my red nails
 
     and blow them, and the wren on the scrubby shrub kites up to the roof
 
     where it's raining with the sun shining. 
 
          Almost dry, not a smudge, and just in time: I showered about an
 
     hour ago, and I'm starting to sweat; I hear Rambo and Tweety in the
 
     kitchen, begging supper. Long as The Lion King is, it never lasts
 
     long enough. I hate it when the sun starts shining while it's
 
     raining, because then the day seems to start over. If the clearing
 
     sky would only stay cloudy, I could put the babies to bed earlier and
 
    
 
 
     call it night time without them catching me in a lie. Then Damon
 
     would call, then he might come over, then...
 
          I try to imagine what it'll be like--what it might have been
 
     like before Ronnie, my ex, and the two babies, born two years apart. 
 
     Just me and Damon alone in some room I can't picture outside of this
 
     double-wide I've lived in since I got out of high school and married
 
     Ronnie. Not at Mama's, two mobile homes up the highway, at the
 
     Cornerville city limits sign. Not with my goody-goody brother always
 
     dropping by after supper. All I can say is, God have mercy on her
 
     soul.
 
          I go through the flimsy front door and hear the wren fluttering
 
     to her nest, the baby birds fussing good now. Cooler inside, but not
 
     cool. I slide the thermostat lever on the living room wall from 75
 
     to 70 degrees, knowing the air conditioner, steady humming and
 
     rattling, won't cool the double-wide to 70. Not in this heat. In the
 
     kitchen, dim even with the sunlight stealing through the windows,
 
     Rambo is rubbing his eyes and whining "Mama," and Tweety, so named
 
     for the cartoon bird she resembles, toddling behind him. Both
 
     stunned-looking as Ronnie, who holds the record for watching tv the
 
     most hours in a row. 
 
          "Juice," says two-year-old Tweety, and holds up her empty bottle
 
     with the blistered rubber nipple. 
 
          "No more juice till after supper," I say, and she tilts the
 
     bottle high and sucks on the nipple, drinking air.
 
          "I'm hungry," says Rambo, tracking behind me to the double sinks
 
     stacked with unwashed dishes and pots. "I'm hot!"
 
          I switch on the fluorescent light, banishing the ghosts of sun
 
     framed in the twin windows.
 
          "Well, you gone have to wait a minute," I say, and he asks why
 
     and I say because I say so--what we both say, seems like, a thousand
 
     times a day. 
 
          He plops to the juice-stippled tiles on his bony butt, bawling,
 
     and I have to step around him to get to the cabinet over the stove,
 
     where I plunder among the toppled cans of food for...what? Soup. 
 
     Chicken Noodle-oos. Which I know he won't eat. Knocking over a jar
 
     of Gerber's carrots I know Tweety won't eat either. Well, I'm
 
     offering it. Like the doctor said--"Just offer it; if they're hungry
 
     they'll eat."
 
          When they don't eat, I salve my doubts with thinking about the
 
     Easter egg hunt in my yard last year and one of the pale little girls
 
     from a trailer in the park behind mine, who ate all six of the smeary-
 
     dyed eggs she found, while Rambo and the other children cracked and
 
     mauled and mushed theirs. When they're hungry they'll eat.
 
          The portable phone rings on the food-spackled wall above the
 
     garbage can that vomits rotted Styrofoam chicken trays and shit
 
     diapers. I hop over Rambo with his bawling baby-turned-boy face to
 
     get to the phone before Damon--it has to be Damon!--hangs up. I
 
     press it tight to my ear and mouth, walking and talking--it is Damon!-
 
     -trying to voice-over Rambo's squealing and Tweety's singing. That
 
     damned Lion King song! I feel embarrassed about the background
 
     racket Damon has to be hearing, laugh loud to cover it, and he stops
 
     talking and I know I've laughed too shrill, maybe laughed at
 
     something serious. I have only an inkling of what boys like Damon
 
      consider class. Store-owner's son, two years at Valdosta State
 
     University, but stalled in his freshman year, whose attention makes
 
     me feel above this double-wide and accidental motherhood.
 
          Tweety latches to my right leg and licks my knee. I pat her on
 
     the head, that bird's crest of hair, open a can of soup, dump it in a
 
     clean-looking bowl from the sink and pop it into the microwave. 
 
     Suddenly mad at Rambo for bawling.
 
          I hold the phone away and say, "Time out, Rambo! Go to your
 
     room right now!" Let Damon know I don't like Rambo either. Let
 
     Damon see the solid-sane side of me, my solid-sane mothering. And
 
     then he can say how smart I am, how up-to-date I am, that my being a
 
     mother is okay by him. I have merit, the kind of woman the tv talk
 
     shows and mags boast is acceptable now. In the nineties it's
 
     sophisticated and sexy to be a strong mother and career woman. But
 
     my new job at the Delta in Cornerville doesn't seem like the kind of
 
     career they mean.
 
          Rambo scoots on the floor and springs to his feet, then shambles
 
     around the corner by the garbage can, his bellowing squeezed now, his
 
     hurt-feelings cry. Down the hall with the seat of his baggy white
 
     jockey shorts accusing me of not mopping the kitchen.
 
          Tweety, bowlegged in a clumped wet Pamper, patters after him. 
 
     "Bubba crying? Bubba crying?" Everything a question, a habit she
 
     picked up from Damon maybe. To please me maybe.
   
         I toggle the timer on the microwave and step away, leaning
 
     against the stove with its level surface of inset eyes that seems
 
     smart and modern to me but probably doesn't to Damon. And I don't
 
     know what is sophisticated, what his mama's stove would look like. 
 
     Whether she cooks even.
 
          "They'll go down in about an hour," I say to Damon. "Right
 
     after I feed them."
 
          "I don't know how you put up with it?" says Damon. "All that
 
     racket?"
 
          "You know how children are."
 
          "I don't want to know? Too much fuss and bother?" 
 
          While Damon tells me about his nuisance nieces and nephews, I
 
     listen to Rambo shouting at Tweety, hear her padding back down the
 
     hall, Rambo behind her. A Power Ranger doll flies over Tweety's head
 
     and lands under the kitchen table, as she wings around the corner,
 
     home-free, laughing with her straight eyebrows hiked to her hair line
 
     when she spots me, then crying as she crashes into the garbage can,
 
     tips it over and sprawls into the waste of bread crusts and jagged
 
     cans and mysterious Coke bottles that look empty but dump enough
 
     syrupy gook to stain brown the entire white floor. 
 
          Bracing the phone to my ear with my shoulder, I help her up and
 
     press her face to my left thigh, tears and baby-spit and sweat
 
     trickling and puddling in my brown sandals. She shudders, sucks her
 
     thumb. Rambo's scared white face peeps around the corner, and I trip
 
     through the trash and yank his stick arm, shaking him and walking him
 
     half-way down the hall. He cries--his hurt-body cry--and lunges
 
     toward his bedroom at the other end. Slams the door. The microwave
 
      beeps. I limp back to the kitchen with Tweety grafted to my leg. I
 
     open the microwave door, hot-handling the bowl of parched Chicken
 
     Noodle-oos to the counter by the refrigerator. Damon is listening to
 
     a Michael Jackson CD, crooning into the phone. I don't like Michael
 
     Jackson. I don't like him--child molester--or his music. I act like
 
     I do.
 
          Suddenly, "Old man says if I want to stay in college," Damon
 
     says, "I gotta toe the line?"
 
          He waits for me to speak.
 
          "What's that mean, toe the line?" I know. I just say that to
 
     be saying something I don't have to think about.
 
          "Hell, I don't know. Get my grades up, I guess?"
 
          "Yeah," I say to Damon, then to Rambo, slinking into the kitchen
 
     like a hungry puppy and scaling up the skittering high chair,
 
     "Rambo! No! Wait!"
 
          I open the freezer compartment of the side-by-side refrigerator
 
     with moldy breath and take a half-circle of ice from the bin. Hold
 
     it to my hot throat, then plop it into the soup, spattering my white
 
     tee-shirt.
 
          "I don't see how you stand it?" says Damon. "I'd go crazy?"
 
          "I am."
 
          "Why don't you call up Ronnie and make him take them awhile?"
 
          "Weekends. He gets them on the weekends." Meaning just me and
 
     you then.
 
          "Two da-ays? That ain't fair?"
 
           "He's got that little trailer, you know." Saying that about
 
     Ronnie's trailer makes him seem poor--poor white trash--all of us
 
     poor, and sets up a comparison to the Walters family in their fine
 
     brick house, south of the Cornerville crossing. "Besides, he has to
 
     work night shift at Occidental," I add. "Sleeps all day."
 
          "Well," says Damon--doing something that lifts his breathy voice
 
     from the phone--"you work too, don't you?"
 
          He's really into phone sex, and I wonder. I don't ask. I stare
 
     out the double window over the sink and see it's getting dark,
 
     finally. "You coming over tonight?" I say.
 
          "Might."
 
          "I'm gone have the babies down in about thirty minutes." I
 
     unlatch Tweety's sticky arm from my leg, where she's dozing and
 
     sucking her thumb, and carry the bowl of watery soup to the high
 
     chair and set it on the tray. Then I pick Rambo up and thread him
 
     between the tray and the seat. His scraped knees jam against the
 
     tray. He screams. I slap his leg, keep listening to Damon. Sprint
 
     down the hall with my hand over the mouthpiece to keep him from
 
     hearing Rambo. I hate Rambo and Ronnie and my mama, and come close
 
     to hating Tweety trailing behind me into my hot, mildewed bedroom,
 
     floored with clothes. Sometimes I'd start picking up and couldn't
 
     stop picking up and that's when it was most dangerous for the
 
     babies. I might even start to hate Damon, who hasn't guessed that
 
     I'm smarter than he is, but knows for a fact I'm older by two years. 
 
     In Cornerville, everybody knows all about you, which is why I hate
 
     living here. I hate the night stand Ronnie and I bought for antique,
 
     which I doubt. Everything else is this plastic house is plastic. 
 
      Even Tweety, now curving into the curve of my hip on the romped-on
 
    bed, looks plastic. Like a replica of the Tweety Bird. "Well," I
 
     say to Damon, "are you coming over or not?"
 
          "I gotta run by the Delta first?" he says, as if he's
 
     stretching, cooling, coming to life again. "Take back these movies I
 
     got over the weekend?"
 
          "I'll be here," I say and punch the off button on the phone
 
     after he has hung up. Never first.
 
    
 
          By ten o'clock I figure he's not coming. I've already got the
 
     babies down, had it out with Ronnie on the phone before he left for
 
     work. I am not giving up my job at the Delta; Miss Houston might be
 
     the nastiest woman in Swanoochee County, but she's a cheap sitter,
 
     has never killed a kid yet. 
 
          Sitting on the blue-mauvey sofa, I watch tv--a news brief about
 
     some crazy mama deliberately driving her car into a lake and drowning
 
     her own babies--still half-waiting for Damon in my new khaki shorts
 
     and white tee with the tomato-sauce stain like blood leaking from my
 
     right nipple. The air conditioner is still humming and rattling, but
 
     shows promise of reaching the 70 degree mark before maybe midnight. 
 
     Or before it quits. A blonde women on "Melrose Place" has a shagged,
 
     heavy-banged hairdo I like, but I'm afraid if I cut my frizzed brown
 
     hair Damon won't like me anymore. Not that he's ever mentioned my
 
     hair, but I'm afraid to change anything that might be what attracted
 
     him. I feel warm, knowing Damon the Hunk likes whatever he likes
 
     about me. 
 
          I get up, shoving aside Tweety's lavender plastic doll stroller,
 
     and part the curtains on a window over the front porch, scanning the
 
     highway for automobile lights. Spread-eyed lights of Damon's slooped
 
     Corvette, specifically. A truck passes, a car, heading east toward
 
     Fargo. I open the door and lean out into the damp pine air, checking
 
     for lights at my mama's trailer, though I know she won't be done at
 
     the Delta, where she's the manager, till after eleven. I'll call her
 
     then, see if she's seen Damon, who she doesn't have a bit of use for,
 
     as she says. Always harping about something--"Young mamas nowadays
 
     don't care about nothing but their hair; you all even look alike." 
 
          I wish I could say she done it because she had a hard life, but
 
     who ain't had a hard life?
 
          I sit again, watching tv, trying not to watch the gold octagonal
 
     clock on the wall between twin gold sconces. A matched set from Home
 
     Interiors. Over-priced junk supposed to make you feel creative by
 
     mixing and matching fake flowers and pictures of fake flowers. Color
 
     schemes depending on "what's in" in decorating for a specific
 
     period. I can't afford to buy the latest. I'll be seeing mauve and
 
     blue as I draw my last breath.
 
          When I hear Rambo whining, I think at first it's in my head,
 
     I've heard it so much. Then his whining turns to crying, and I sit
 
     here hoping he's crying in his dream. Or if he's awake and crying
 
     and I don't go into his room and let him know I know he's crying,
 
     he'll give up and quit. After a few more minutes, when his crying
 
     links to crying, I know he's on a roll. 
 
          I go down the hall and stand close to the wall at his bedroom
 
     door, gazing down at my stocky tan legs that could be what Damon
 
     likes best about me, and listen. Rambo cries louder, the sound
 
     sitting up now. I have to go in before he wakes Tweety in the crib
 
     at the foot of his bed. 
 
          He's tugging at his left ear; when he sees me he wiggles from
 
     beneath the sheet and drags it from the bed to the door. 
 
          "What's going on, Buddy?" I say, walking him in his dirty jockey
 
     shorts toward the living room. Sometimes tv puts him back to sleep. 
 
          "Ear hurts," he says.
 
          "Go lay down on the sofa," I say, "and I'll warm up some ear oil
 
     and get you some Tylenol."
 
          He stumbles ahead of me, crying, while I stop off at the
 
     bathroom, turn on the light and stare at my face in the mirror of the
 
     medicine cabinet: brown hair pulled back in a bushy ponytail with
 
     tendrils fringing my round face; round glasses with wire frames--the
 
     in-thing, intellectual--worn for seeing. My lying eyes--could be
 
     green, could be brown. 
 
          When I get back to the living room with the ear oil, Rambo is
 
     stamping, thin and white, in the scatter of toys, stooping and
 
     squalling and hugging his stomach.
 
          "Come on," I say, "lay down right here." I sit on the blue sofa
 
     with its stained mauve flowers and pat the cushion next to me for him
 
     to come. 
 
          A knock on the front door makes my heart knock. I walk past
 
     Rambo, lost in his pain--ear or stomach?--and open the door. Damon
 
     is standing on the porch with one hand propped on the pushed-in metal
 
   siding. When he lets go it phoofs out. He flashes his level white
 
     teeth and steps inside: tall and tan in a mint polo with a Ralph
 
     Lauren logo, skin Levis and Nikes white as his teeth.
 
          "Hey, fella," he says to Rambo, "thought you'd be in bed by
 
     now?" He reaches out to knuckle Rambo's spiked hair.
 
          Rambo ducks and dashes to the sofa and presses his face into a
 
     cushion--knobby spine and blue-viened legs, and those dirty shorts
 
     gaping around the leg holes.
 
          "He's got the ear ache," I say to Damon.
 
          "Don't we all?" says Damon and covers his smallish ears.
 
          "I was just about to put some ear oil in it," I say, "then tuck
 
     him in again."
 
          I go over to the sofa and sit next to Rambo's burry brown head
 
     and twist it so that his left ear is up. He wriggles free, screams
 
     tearing with him across the living room and down the hall. I follow,
 
     sure he'll wake Tweety this time. He scrambles into the chute
 
     between his bed and the wall and sits clutching his knees. Tweety is
 
     standing in her crib, watching with those huge blue eyes and that
 
     twig of hair that earned her the name. I think that the nick-name
 
     "Rambo" didn't take, that Ronnie was stupid for thinking it would
 
     take. I didn't never once think that; maybe I still don't. I don't
 
     want to say that name again; I don't want Damon to think I'm stupid
 
     too.
 
          "Get up, Raymond," I say, coming around the bad with the ear oil
 
     for the kid who looks like a Raymond for real.  
 
          "I want my daddy," he shrieks and scooches to face the paneled
 
     maple headboard with his scrawny legs folded.
 
          "Well," I say, "that's too bad." I hope Damon is listening. 
 
     "Your daddy's gone to work, so you might as well get up here on the
 
     bed and let me doctor your ear."
 
          I crawl across the bed and snatch at his right arm. He yanks
 
     free and crooks it over his crying face. Not even cute now that he's
 
     four. I drop the open blue bottle of ear oil and it rolls under the
 
     bed. 
 
          "Alright, dammit!" I say. "I've had it with you!" I slap at his
 
     arm, miss and hit him on the head. Too hard. Sometimes I'd start
 
     hitting and couldn't stop hitting and that was when it was most
 
     dangerous for my babies. My handprint shines red on his silvery
 
     scalp. He scoots to his back on the floor, kicking and screaming. 
 
     Tweety cries. Dropping to the mattress and staring out through the
 
     crib bars.
 
          I crawl across the bed to leave and see Damon leaning in the
 
     doorway with his long tanned hands loose alongside. "I'll come back
 
     another time, Ginger," he says low. 
 
          I follow him to the living room, where the duet of crying
 
     filters through the fake-wood walls. "If you'll wait a few minutes,"
 
     I say, "they'll both be asleep."
 
          "I got a test tomorrow, you know?" He stops at the open front
 
     door, turns and spells me with those brown fluid eyes. "But I'll see
 
     you around, okay?"
 
          "Okay," I say and watch him swagger across the porch, across the
 
     yard, watch his moon-struck body merge with the slooped body of the
 
     Corvette. Sure and aloof and free.
 
 
         I didn't plan it, I didn't think about it, I just did what I did
 
     next because I couldn't think of another thing in the world to do. I
 
     did it to stop the crying. I did it to live. 
 
    
 
          I wait the next morning till I figure Mama's up, then call her
 
     to say Rambo's got the ear ache, I won't be going to work, I have to
 
     take him to the doctor. I doll Tweety up in her blue gingham sunsuit
 
     to match her eyes. "Mama crying?" she says, "Bubba crying?" I carry
 
     her to the hall and stand her by the living room door. "Stay there,
 
     baby," I say, "and don't get dirty."
 
          I go to the bedroom for Rambo, who is knotted on the bed, crying
 
     in his new tennis shoes and brown shorts and matching striped shirt I
 
     bought at Wal-mart for him to start pre-kindergarten next week. I
 
     don't talk to him, just scoop him up and cradle him in my arms down
 
     the hall and seek out Tweety in the kitchen playing in the garbage
 
     can. Trash all around her fat baby feet. I don't speak to her, I
 
     don't say "Ank!" I simply walk on through the living room to the
 
     front door and open it to the morning sun and keening of the wren's
 
     chicks, and carry Rambo out to the car, set him in the back seat and
 
     buckle him in, crying. Then go inside again for Tweety, lifting her
 
     high in my arms to keep my cheek from touching hers, to keep from
 
     inhaling the sweet-stale smell of her sprigged hair. I place her in
 
     the baby seat next to Rambo, double-check the hitch. 
 
          "Bubba crying?" she says, and I say, "Shh!" and shut the door
 
     because I don't want him to stop crying and make me stop crying and
 
     change my mind.
 
          But I didn't plan it. Call it something else.
 
           I start the car, brimming with crying, back out of the mowed
 
     weed yard onto 94, and drive east past Mama's trailer at the city
 
     limits sign, all the way through Cornerville without having to stop
 
     at the traffic light at the crossing. Cars and trucks at the Delta
 
     on the corner and across the road at the courthouse, but none on the
 
     highway, none passing or meeting me as I head toward the Alapaha
 
     River bridge shimmering white in the morning slant of sun.
 
          First time, I slow down when I get to the rutted ramp, east of
 
     the bridge, looking, checking, losing my nerve. Maybe because Tweety
 
    is singing The Lion King song, now and then stopping to say, "Bubba
 
     crying? Mama crying?"
 
          I drive on west along 94 a couple of miles, sure I'll keep
 
     driving till I get to the doctor in Valdosta, but make a quick u-turn
 
     on the cross of gravel at the intersecion of 136. A spin of green
 
     pines and gray highway and sun. I hear Rambo's head smack the window-
 
     -he cries harder, his you-hurt-me cry, which is distinctly different
 
     from the earache cry I've been listening to all night. Makes it
 
     easier for me to go back to the bridge. 
 
          I'll do it this time. I sit high, crank down my window and
 
     consider plunging the car down the west bank, this side of the
 
     bridge. If I go into Cornerville to turn around, somebody might
 
     notice. But when I get to the start of the bridge, I see the west
 
     bank is too weedy to tell if it drops off or slopes. I drive on
 
     across the bridge, slow so I can look down at the river, at the
 
     sloping east bank of sand with a jeep-trail leading from the road
 
     ramp through thickets of bamboo and willow and tupelo to the tea-
 
     tinted shallows flowing over scalloped sand and the sudden pitch of
 
      black water off the west bank where I've wisely decided not to drive
 
     the car down. Somebody might have been hurt.
 
         East of the bridge, on my left, I turn in at the cemetery with
 
     its bleached headstones and stark sand, back out and veer toward the
 
     shoulder this side of the bridge. Dream-listening to the unreal
 
     rumbling of the car down the rutted ramp, west along the jeep-trail
 
     toward the calm-flowing water, listening to the crying and the Lion
 
     King Song in Tweety's tiny voice. Dream-seeing the concrete pylons
 
     on my right with the names of lovers painted the red of my nails. 
 
     Dream-feeling the car's bucking in and out of gullies, wheels digging
 
     into the sand and slowing the car, then rushing toward the rushing
 
     river and hurling into the shallows with a great splash of water that
 
     slides like honey down the windshield, slow as the car inching toward
 
     the dark dropoff, the black water. 
 
          Rambo's you-hurt-me cry turns to screaming. I don't look back. 
 
     I don't look back even when Tweety screams too. I just sit there
 
     waiting for the car to inch farther out and under, wondering if it
 
     will bog in the sand or float free, and when it does begin to float,
 
     to sink, I climb through the window and perch on the ledge, feet
 
     resting in the water pooled on the seat, and stare north over the car
 
     roof at the river funneling between rocks and cry till the screaming
 
     in the car stops.
 
          I don't look at my babies. I swim with the current toward the
 
     mussel-shaped sand bar downriver, listening to the car gurgle its
 
     last, to the crickets and locusts buzzing. The silence of my own not-
 
     crying.
 
           I didn't do it, I didn't plan to do it, I guess it's all right
 
     just to dream it up. I steer the car from the shoulder to the
 
     highway, cross the bridge, and head to the doctor in Valdosta. 
 
     They're safe again, till the next time.
 
    
 
          Anybody out there knows the whereabouts of my babies, I beg you,
 
     bring'em back to their mama. Babies, if you can hear me, your mama
 
     misses you.
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